Okay first crit ever...here I go

Firstly this is a lovely idea 8D I adore how this looks, it's such a cute idea and full of imagination. You have improved on you raptor anatomy a lot since you last drew this character the head structure looks a lot better...however to make him look more raptor like; I would lengthen his snout a little more...to look a little thinner...however this may be a style choice you wanted to go for which is cool

the posing on this is brilliant as well, so much life and motion has been thrown into his stance. I'm not so sure about how the legs are spread on the bottom drawing, the hips look a little disjointed. And the front arm looks a little too short on the bottom image. However these are only little problems which can be easily work on.

Your colouring work is fantastic as usual. Your colouring work has packed even more personality into this character and really brings the piece to life

Fantastic job - I hope this helps a little ^_^

The top half of the image is extremely vibrant, and even the smallest thing like the spittle or flying dirt adds to it's deep detail! The mediums that you used for this mix together oh so well! I can only imagine how long it took you to get where you are now! The second's tone adds to his sadness (And maybe even pain!) Heck, it even teaches a valuable lesson: Don't jump too hard on the trampoline and don't surpass weight limits! XD

It is extremely well done, just like all your images Carnival! You never cease to amaze me!