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..yupz, 
flew away from us back to America last Monday~~~
i was very rushed to get a card in before he went, ((..with wurk grinding me to a fine dust, and MIDfur on the horizen)) and i felt the letter i wrote probably wasn't written as peotically as it could have been.. But from the bottom of our collective Tassie hearts, we all have come to know and lourv you Jyorsh.. and we will miss you
It feels like it's been longer than it has without him, so much is happening each day that keeps me more than busy but i still find myself reflecting on the things i used to enjoy with Jshu-ponz..... ((yeah, i was driving((yeah driving now on my own too! all thanx to you!)) in the car back home today and was all like; "Hrrrrrrrm, B.B.R........ ... .....'Big Buxom Radish' ....lol~" ))
I guess all we can do iz take into our hearts and minds all the good times we've shared and wait again until we meet and create many more :'3
Thankyou. for everything.
*inked witha 0.4 micron and 'blu' feltip. Coloured with assorted markers, and digi-touched a lil' here and there.
here's a link also to the lil' image inside the card [link]
Jyoshu-bunz © ~thechuckface
ARTz by meh~
flew away from us back to America last Monday~~~i was very rushed to get a card in before he went, ((..with wurk grinding me to a fine dust, and MIDfur on the horizen)) and i felt the letter i wrote probably wasn't written as peotically as it could have been.. But from the bottom of our collective Tassie hearts, we all have come to know and lourv you Jyorsh.. and we will miss you
It feels like it's been longer than it has without him, so much is happening each day that keeps me more than busy but i still find myself reflecting on the things i used to enjoy with Jshu-ponz..... ((yeah, i was driving((yeah driving now on my own too! all thanx to you!)) in the car back home today and was all like; "Hrrrrrrrm, B.B.R........ ... .....'Big Buxom Radish' ....lol~" ))
I guess all we can do iz take into our hearts and minds all the good times we've shared and wait again until we meet and create many more :'3
Thankyou. for everything.
*inked witha 0.4 micron and 'blu' feltip. Coloured with assorted markers, and digi-touched a lil' here and there.
here's a link also to the lil' image inside the card [link]
Jyoshu-bunz © ~thechuckface
ARTz by meh~
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773x1100px 1.08 MB
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactWell I have to say, its pretty impressive, and rather nice detail, and he is a cute Character. On one slight note though, regarding the nipples. This character looks like he has some decently thick fur, and on animals, chest fur is the thickest, basically his nipples shouldnt be showing, considering the manner he is drawn in. Basically its as if you drew the nipples on top of the fur. Its not that I consider nipples to be abhorrent or anything, its just the kind of mistake that really stands out when it happens. I give three reccomendations for correction. One, you can forgo them entirely, two is to thin out the fur, or make a colorless outline.
On another note, on the angel wings, the feathers are a little random. if you look at a birds wings, their feathers are placed in pretty even rows, as well as having a regular shape, I dont know if it is intentional or not, but his right wing looks pretty ragged, where his left wing looks a lot better. I know birds/angels wings are difficult, from personal experience they arent easy things to do, but there are quite a few references out there. Just type in "wing reference" in the DA search engine, and you should find some.
On a positive note, I like the drawing quite a bit, or I wouldnt be doing the critique. And this is the first time I have actually used this critique thing, usually Id just comment